I am a Year 6 learner in Room 8 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Miss Parrant.
Friday, 17 May 2019
Narative wrtting
One day Kama the pig and Kai went to Sandy Beach in Ohau in Hawaii.Kama has very very dark skin. It’s funny when Kama walks because he walks like a dog. Kama has dark grey ears and a very pointy feet. Kai is the owner of Kama. Kai and Kama love going surfing together. Kai loves to spend time with Kama. When they finally got to the beach you could see the enormous waves there were. There was also lots of high palm trees. The color of the sand was an orange color and tan too. You could see a long tropical mountain from the left side. You could hear the waves crashing into each other. Kama could smell the tropical salty water and Kai could feel the water splashing onto his skin. After Kai and Kama went out to the ocean for a surf Kama the pig wanted to have a surf by himself. When Kama went for a surf by himself he got a humongous wave then got her washed away. But after two or three hours later Kama got washed back to shore and luckily Kai was there wishing that Kama would get washed to shore and guess what his wish came true. Kai told Kama that next time Kama would not be able to go surfing by himself because he might get washed away by the enormous waves again and Kama agreed.
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