Most Dangerous Writing task

The two pieces of writing down below is the writing that I did on the most dangerous writing task. I'm sorry for the spelling mistakes I had to write none stop. The first writing is the one the I failed,The second one is when I tried again.


1. Once upon a time there was...... Whoa whoa whoa we don't have time for that i'm.

2. Once apon a time......... Whoa whoa whoa, we don't have time i'm about to crash into a house pool, and by the way my name is jeff. Aghhhhh! Whoa ummm. "What did you do to my house pool" said a the man who owned the house. " uhhhh ummmmm I......." said jeff