You might be wondering what is that piece of writing. Well that is the piece of the writing that I did on the dangerous writing task. It's when you have to do none stop writing for five or more minutes. But I had to look at a picture and the first ting that pops in my mind that is what I have to write about.
Here is a link to the Dangerous writing Challenge
And maybe you might like it and be a better writer.
Once upon a time there was a............ No time for that I'm on a dangerous mission, right now I'm about to grab the cheese from the mouse trap and by the way this is agent mouse. I'm just about to get the cheese but I need to make sure how I can get it without getting caught in the mouse trap. So maybe I can go down from the ceiling and get it by climbing down the rope. Good idea agent mouse. Oh that was my assistant, he runs the computer stuff and gives me good and cool gadgets. Now lets climb down and get that cheese. Oh this might be the wrong time to tell you why the cheese is so important. Well it's because well......... It's the only food left.
I am a Year 6 learner in Room 8 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Miss Parrant.
Showing posts with label Dangerous Writing Challenge. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Dangerous Writing Challenge. Show all posts
Wednesday, 4 September 2019
Monday, 19 August 2019
Most Dangerous Writing task
The two pieces of writing down below is the writing that I did on the most dangerous writing task. I'm sorry for the spelling mistakes I had to write none stop. The first writing is the one the I failed,The second one is when I tried again.
1. Once upon a time there was...... Whoa whoa whoa we don't have time for that i'm.
2. Once apon a time......... Whoa whoa whoa, we don't have time i'm about to crash into a house pool, and by the way my name is jeff. Aghhhhh! Whoa ummm. "What did you do to my house pool" said a the man who owned the house. " uhhhh ummmmm I......." said jeff
1. Once upon a time there was...... Whoa whoa whoa we don't have time for that i'm.
2. Once apon a time......... Whoa whoa whoa, we don't have time i'm about to crash into a house pool, and by the way my name is jeff. Aghhhhh! Whoa ummm. "What did you do to my house pool" said a the man who owned the house. " uhhhh ummmmm I......." said jeff
Tuesday, 6 August 2019
Dangerous Writing Challenge
Once upon a time there was an elephant that was friends with a cat but let me tell you how they became friends. So first the elephant was so lonely and he was crying the a black cat came along and asked him what happened. "What wrong elephant" Said the black cat. " It's my trunk it's clogged" said the elephant "Can you help me" said the elephant. I'm sorry I can't but I'll look for a doctor. " what kind of doctor"." A giraffe doctor they are the best".
The writing on top was the writing that I did today I had to do none stop writing but first I had to look at a picture and the first thing that pops in my mind is what I had to write, but we only had five minutes.
The writing on top was the writing that I did today I had to do none stop writing but first I had to look at a picture and the first thing that pops in my mind is what I had to write, but we only had five minutes.
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